hi immanuel looks good! minor comments: bullet lists that are full sentences should have a period at the end. slide 7: You’re missing “the” in front of “ell” , “same”… and I just got back from Moscow where definite articles are illegal! 9: Do you mean low S/N? or do you really mean made the beam systematics are low enough for BICEP2? What does it mean that it is “new” and yet was used for BICEP2 anyway?? 10: if the room is big, it’s going to be hard to see the text on the right hand side with best regards, -Brian __________________________________ Brian G. Keating Associate Professor of Physics Center for Astrophysics & Space Sciences University of California, San Diego (UCSD) 9500 Gilman Drive La Jolla, CA 92093-0424 Web: http://physics.ucsd.edu/~bkeating/ Group: http://cosmology.ucsd.edu/ On Jun 23, 2014, at 2:04 PM, Immanuel Buder <ibuder@gmail.com<mailto:ibuder@gmail.com>> wrote: <SPIE_9153-38_Immanuel_Buder.pdf>